Curse

darkrawlinson · Jan 28, 2007, 05:52 AM // 05:52

Got bored so I drew something. Sorry I didnt take any Art class in my Sophomore year in High School lately so I don't really know how to draw. I dont know how to shade or draw the anatomy of a person, so the drawing is a bit bleh. Wells here it is. Comments and Suggestions to make it better is appreciated

Oh and yeah I dont got a scanner so bleh to dat aswell
yeah i dont got any art supplies, or mechanical lead pencils.

FelixCarter · Jan 28, 2007, 06:04 AM // 06:04

Nonsense. These are superb pictures. It's a shame you don't have a scanner. I bet a lot of people would like to have you do commissions for them.

Your "anime-style" is great. I, personally, like it. While your proportions are off in some areas, your skill and abilities will increase with time and more practice. Draw something once or twice a day.

I love your facial expressions! ^_^

Please make more.

P.S. Your hands are also brilliant! Do more poses with hand gestures! ^_^

AW Lore · Jan 28, 2007, 06:05 AM // 06:05

very good drawings, me likes.

if you plan on taking comisions anytime in the future.

hopefully ill be the first:
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r...iledMesmer.jpg

all in all, very good drawings.

Jeff Highwind · Jan 28, 2007, 06:10 AM // 06:10

The sin is quite brilliant imo. It's like he's thinking "*sigh*, kids."

daraaksii · Jan 28, 2007, 07:52 AM // 07:52

Very nice drawings! I still can't draw in anime style :\

Mistical miss · Jan 28, 2007, 07:59 AM // 07:59

Ok this isnt that bad to start with

but just a good comment won't help a lot so here is some advise ^^:

Starting with the girl, her left arm now moves outwards, like a "J" -shape, whereas it should go more like the other way around. Another thing to note about her arm is that if she has that pose she probably has her elbow somewhat closer to her side (now its "<" and I'm looking for "(" -shape). Then the hips, her hips should come out better, at the picture her legs bend below her hips, move the bend up. I think that will do the trick.

Now the sin, his pose looks like its seen from the side then changes at the belly, and changes again at the pants.. this one is easily fixed, make the gem on the pants match with the middle of the chestarmor ^^ (changing the chestarmor has the better effect). Now for his chest.. its huuge, I mean hes nearly a bodybuilder... this fits a gladsarmor warrior better to be honest

I'd make the chest-belly difference not that big, eating some off the chest and a bit off the belly (leave some difference to make him muscled still though).
A last hard to fix thing, as I don't know how to do it well from this view... the chestpiece now looks as it should look when u look at it from near-front view, while u have to look at it from a lower point of view. Try and make it match the pants-line.

Note: I'm not the most flawless artist either

I just try to help out, if you dislike critics (seen someone who dislikes critics on another forum) just tell, and I'll stop

darkrawlinson · Jan 28, 2007, 08:53 AM // 08:53

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mistical miss

Ok this isnt that bad to start with

but just a good comment won't help a lot so here is some advise ^^:

Starting with the girl, her left arm now moves outwards, like a "J" -shape, whereas it should go more like the other way around. Another thing to note about her arm is that if she has that pose she probably has her elbow somewhat closer to her side (now its "<" and I'm looking for "(" -shape). Then the hips, her hips should come out better, at the picture her legs bend below her hips, move the bend up. I think that will do the trick.

Now the sin, his pose looks like its seen from the side then changes at the belly, and changes again at the pants.. this one is easily fixed, make the gem on the pants match with the middle of the chestarmor ^^ (changing the chestarmor has the better effect). Now for his chest.. its huuge, I mean hes nearly a bodybuilder... this fits a gladsarmor warrior better to be honest

I'd make the chest-belly difference not that big, eating some off the chest and a bit off the belly (leave some difference to make him muscled still though).
A last hard to fix thing, as I don't know how to do it well from this view... the chestpiece now looks as it should look when u look at it from near-front view, while u have to look at it from a lower point of view. Try and make it match the pants-line.

Note: I'm not the most flawless artist either

I just try to help out, if you dislike critics (seen someone who dislikes critics on another forum) just tell, and I'll stop

aites man im takin notes on this. Sorry like I said I dont have much experience in drawings. Sigh wish I had money to buy those anime drawing books or what not. I just memorize a pose/ picture and try to remember it when I'm drawing. So I dont know how things are suppose to look if der in dis way or dat >_< sigh, Im thinking of taking drawing and painting next year. Again thanks for the critics I'll try to be a bit better .

Mistical miss · Jan 28, 2007, 09:01 AM // 09:01

Don't be sorried

, besides if you were drawing all the time you wouldn't have found out how to solo tombs with an assassin

that would be a shame..

As for memorizing poses: try to stand in the pose that u have drawn, you can more easily find out whats wrong then ^^

darkrawlinson · Jan 29, 2007, 02:57 AM // 02:57

ok i tried doing the posture, but bleh, i feel awkward doing it. Well I tried drawing ur character Lore, but I think I messed her up. I think the necklace is a bit off >_< well atleast I tried sigh... so here

AW Lore · Jan 29, 2007, 05:47 AM // 05:47

me likes very much.

dunno why, but it soothed me after a frustrating day at the gate of abaddon.

but she kinda looks sad... maybe she is sad cus i had a bad night?

very good drawing, ill try to contact you in game to pay, and after that... ill request another one for my mesmer

Mistical miss · Jan 29, 2007, 06:00 AM // 06:00

That pose is better drawn

still a few comments if you don't mind

- Her underarm bends too early, it should bend at the wrist instead of halfway the underarm.
- The necklace

as u mentioned, the right side (for the viewer) should start a bit lower, then move the middle of the necklace to the right. Try following the lines of her corset a bit.
- Her bra lines should perhaps be bit more evenly divided, I think the right one is as it should be, but the left a bit too much \ could be more |

But this is not a bad drawing! keep it up

darkrawlinson · Jan 29, 2007, 07:32 AM // 07:32

Quote:

Originally Posted by AW Lore

me likes very much.

dunno why, but it soothed me after a frustrating day at the gate of abaddon.

but she kinda looks sad... maybe she is sad cus i had a bad night?

very good drawing, ill try to contact you in game to pay, and after that... ill request another one for my mesmer

naw dude, its aites. I just want to get better in drawing so well, I'll accept any drawings dat people want (for now) >_<. Anways, dis isn't even scanned, which sucks >_<. Ah wells, I just want to get better in drawing so I can enter in this year's wall design for the sophmore in my school. Its not till three months so I'm hoping dat by learning to draw GW characters I can get better. >_< plus theres mysical's input which helps alot.

still need work

Saleh No.1 · Jan 29, 2007, 12:20 PM // 12:20

If you don't mind could you draw a pic of my necro?

http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w...omhall/her.jpg

If you do it then thanks

bg_solidsnake · Jan 29, 2007, 01:48 PM // 13:48

I've seen ppl who think they can draw but they cant but u can so good work especialy on them curves

!

AW Lore · Jan 29, 2007, 04:29 PM // 16:29

aight mate, as you wish, but when you decide to take pay for the commission, ill repay the drawing or drawings, if i get you to make me another

well, while the other art eaters dont notice this thread, there is going to be slow request progression, so im gonna help you a bit in the meantime.

i would so love another drawing of my mesmer